Ambush by Gbemisola Adeoti

The land is a giant whale

that swallows the sinker,

with hook, line and bait

aborting dreams of a good catch

fishers turn home at dusk

blue Peter on empty ships

all Peters with petered out desires.

 

The land is a saber-toothed tiger

that cries deep in the glade

While infants shudder home

the grizzled ones snatch their gut

from bayonets of tribulation

halting venturous walk at dusk

 

The land is a giant hawk

that courts unceasing disaster

as it hovers and hoots in space

 

The land lies patiently ahead

awaiting in ambush

those who point away from a direction

where nothing happens toward the shore of possibilities.

 

Background

Ambush is written by Gbemisola Adeoti, a professor of English Language at the Obafemi Awolowo University, (OAU) Ile-Ife (Nigeria) and the director of the Institute of Cultural Studies of the same institution. He is a seasoned poet, a social commentator and writer with many works to his credit.

Analysis

The poem Ambush portrays the socio-political problems facing Nigeria. The poet describes how lofty dreams, aspiration, visions, and hopes are shattered by the political class that continually plunders the nation’s resources.

In the first stanza, he directly compares the ruling class with a giant whale that swallows the nation’s resources leaving nothing behind: The land is a giant whale/ that swallow the sinker/ with hook, line and bait aborting dreams of a good catch.

By way of allusion, he further relates the Nigerian situation to the Biblical event where Apostle Peter toiled all night on sea without catching any fish until he met Jesus who told him what to do: blue Peter on empty ships/ all Peters with petered out desires.

As a result of the many years of failed governance, the country experiences all kinds of social problems like violence, robbery, insurgence, kidnapping thus becoming a sabre-toothed tiger/a giant hawk. The youths and elder statesmen refrain from agitation for fear of being persecuted or repressed by government: While infants shudder home/the grizzled ones snatch their gut/from bayonets of tribulation/halting venturous walk at dusk.

In the last stanza, while the poet looks forward to a generation that will take the nation out of its hopeless state toward the shore of possibilities, his hope is threatened by the ravenous nature of the ruling class: The land lies patiently ahead/ awaiting in ambush, ready to devour the future change-agents.

Structure

It is a four stanza poem arranged in sequence. It does not have a consistent meter pattern or rhythm.

Language

The language is simple but metaphoric. Imagery There are lot of symbolic expressions in the poem which enhance the poet’s message. Examples: “giant whale”, “giant hawk”, “petered out desires”, “sabre-toothed tiger”, “grizzled ones”.

Mood and Tone

The mood is gloomy and sober with a corresponding tone of lamentation and pessimism. There appears to be a shift in tone in the last stanza as he expresses hope but he ends the stanza on a pessimistic note.

Poetic Devices/Figures of Speech

1. Metaphor: This is direct comparison. Examples: The land is a giant whale/ The land is a sabre-toothed tiger/The land is a giant hawk.

2. Allusion: The poet alludes to the Biblical Peter in stanza 1.

3. Alliteration: Examples: that swallow the sinker/all Peter with petered out desires

4. Personification: The poet gives life to land. Examples: that swallow the sinker/The land….hoovers and hoots in space/The land lies patiently ahead.

What other figures of speech can you identify in this poem?

 

 

 


 

 

 

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  6. pelemo oyonude Reply

    The land awaitin in ambush[personification]

  7. Amicsizy Reply

    Hovers and hoots :assonance
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  8. Treasure Reply

    Repetition: The Land……… The Land………The Land

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  10. dadda oluwasola Reply

    repetition………..- peter……..blue peter………. With petered out…….

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  32. Chrysm Reply

    Very helpful. But I think the political class is not sole cause of Africa’s woes. The people and their unexamined beliefs, superstitions, traditions…. are contributory. So, to me, “land” refers to the continent and its people, including the ruling class.

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  38. Michael Omoregbee Reply

    I am not very sure I agree fully with the analysis of this poem presented here. There are many things rightly said, but the major thrust of this poem has not been captured by this analysis. Just my thoughts

  39. Agu glory Reply

    Another poetic device that i observed is * Enjambment* the writer uses run on lines to write his poem hence making it more comprehensible.

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  46. Benjamin Reply

    to my own point of view of the theme are: possibility, Hope and the land is green. there is hope and possibility in the land despite the challenges and hardship that is facing us a state.The hope and possibility are hiding waiting patiently ahead waiting for those that have eyes and are not pointing towards the negative aspect of the land they are the ones that will see it (Hope, possibility).

  47. Cletus Reply

    Is this the summary of the poem or the complet poem?

    • Dayo Okubule Reply

      @Cletus. That is the complete poem with its summary

  48. francis chukz Reply

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  49. Nwabueze Jennifer Reply

    Mrs Dayo please what does the poet personae mean by Peter with Peter petered out desires.

  50. Alfred Ennin Reply

    The poet emmploys simple diction but metaphoric as explained earlier.
    All add to the aesthetism of the poem
    Thanx for the vivid explanation

  51. Anuoluwapo Reply

    Thanks so much, nice one. What about other poems like pianos and drums, Birches. Etc. That birches is really giving me headache. Please help us out.

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